Story telling unit 1: 'SOFT' pitch

Had to make a pitch of no more than 25 words for the short film 'SOFT', and managed to do it in 19 with:

'Roles are challenged when physical conflict threatens the lives of a father and son. Will they conquer their fears?'

The link for the film is
https://www.google.co.uk/url?sa=t&source=web&rct=j&url=https://vimeo.com/19705053&ved=0ahUKEwiXuKvYhbDPAhVFIsAKHXp_Bs0Q3ywIdTAM&usg=AFQjCNFejg9SXV3C5zaZ5NdDl9Q420n47A&sig2=nFp72TWkK3llqzovJhkdrA

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